She walks the straight and narrow.
They wait to catch her when she falls.
Read THE NEXT STEP at Flashes In The Dark
Monday, September 21, 2009
The NEXT STEP at FLASHES IN THE DARK
She walks the straight and narrow.
They wait to catch her when she falls.
Read THE NEXT STEP at Flashes In The Dark
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6 comments:
Oh, it's this one! I liked this one, I'm glad it's now open to a wider audience. I left a comment on Flashes.
It's bloody good!
I feel so bad for Loreli, but so good for you, Lori. You've created another killer story. Now go get started on another, and another.
Thanks for your comments here and over at Flashes. You guys are the best. ;)
~Paul, thanks for reading and I'm so glad the images worked for you.
~Yes, sir, Angel
~Barry! You read this for me about what... six months back or so? You know it's dear to my heart, I appreciate your encouragement.
"they are down there, down there where the black spirals sharp and steep..."
...gazing up in dark delight. Reading your work is like meeting someone whose presence I've felt in dreams.
I loved the image of the fog playing hide and seek with her feet.
So good.
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