a deal with the sea witch
seals her fate
and
the wizard Merlin's
Thanks to editor Reece Notley of Three Crow Press.
seals her fate
and
the wizard Merlin's
Thanks to editor Reece Notley of Three Crow Press.
Friday, March 12, 2010
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8 comments:
There is such a wonderful sway and rhythm to this piece, kind of rocking, then lulling then whoaa. very cool, love the olde english feel to the verbiage too.
Cool, Mike. That was the intent of the piece, in that very order. Thanks for feeling the olde english vibes. You rock. ;)
very cool piece :)
Thank YOU, Michelle, for the compliment and for reading. I appreciate it!
I really like this. By strange coincidence I'm working on a mermaid story at the moment. Perhaps there's something in the wind . . .
Love the allusions to the original Little Mermaid -- a personal favourite of mine.
Are you really Barry? Crazyness. I actually had written this last summer and submitted it in sept or october.
Very interested to see what you come up with! Thanks again, buddy. <3
Wicked girl! Loved the dicey ending - and this sentence, "The guilt I give to the harsh sun."
So cool.
Hey girl,
I'm so glad you liked this story. It's pure evil, huh? ;)
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